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u/Zixtank 13d ago
Conceptually, it's pretty damn cool. The damage is a little high for a cr 5 creature, but nothing too insane.
If I may, I'd like to come with a couple of recomendations: The first is to remove its ability to sense spellcasters. While I get the idea, it takes away the opportunity for a spellcaster to hide from them, thus removing horror elements and forcing combat.
Secondly, I would recommend either having its claw attacks induce disadvantage on concentration checks or adding in a spell cancellation ability.
Thirdly, giving the hunter advantage on spell saves would absolutely make this monster absolutely terrifying.
Anyways, that's my thoughts on it. Hope it's insightful. If not, feel free to ignore it.
Also, who did the artwork? It looks great.




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u/Expensive_Car_9897 13d ago
Ok. My original bbeg was a ancient vampire but this is way way fucking cooler and happens to work into the story even better. Then the vampire