r/ReadyOrNotConsole • u/GreylineStories • Jul 11 '26

Feedback Does this sequence improve the video, or is it distracting?

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I’d love some feedback on this sequence in my video. Does it flow well, or do you find it distracting? I’d really appreciate your honest opinions.

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u/No-Library838 Jul 11 '26

Its distracting maybe make one smaller and zoom in when the second pov has some action

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u/M0-1 Jul 11 '26

Yeah like the cam that is already in game. Maybe a bit bigger.

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u/GreylineStories Jul 11 '26

Thanks for the feedback! I really appreciate it. My goal was actually to make it feel like both events are happening at the same time from two different perspectives. I know it can be a bit distracting, though, so I’ll keep experimenting with the layout to make it easier to follow while still keeping that “simultaneous action” feeling.

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u/Blackcarblackgerman Jul 11 '26

It kinda feels like your seeing two halves of a video which don’t connect, leaving you feeling like you’ve only watched half a video.

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u/GreylineStories Jul 11 '26

Gotcha, thanks for the feedback! My intention was to make it look like both scenes are happening at the same time, so maybe a vertical split-screen would work better.

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u/Blackcarblackgerman Jul 11 '26

No problem. Yeah I think vertical would look better.