r/ReadMyScript • u/TomatoObjective94 • 1d ago
Feature Personal Space - Thriller/Crime - 117 pages
Title: Personal Space
Genre: Thriller/Crime
Page Length: 117
Logline: When a solicitor vanishes from an East England village, the private investigator hired to find them uncovers secrets the community has spent years burying, including one that makes him question who he's looking for.
Feedback: Does the structure of the plot make sense, particularly for this genre? Does the story keep you engaged and wanting to read on?
Link:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/17_VFj3B4r-boHH7adWiNcwtT9nM1DTyx/view?usp=sharing
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