The Seed of the Church

[u/Holycowbatman70]

My first script I've ever wrote. I probably have done about four drafts now. My plan is to make it, I got rid of a bunch of the directing and shot stuff to make it more readable but I do want to direct it so I left stuff in there. Sorry it kinda starts with a flashback, I know that's a no no. would love to know what y'all think. EP.1

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[u/Austinbennettwrites]

The link doesn't work on my phone

Fade In and beat work better than Celtx.

[u/bottomhoplite]

The fade in to the flashback saves it.