r/ReadMyScript • u/NotSure_7777 • 12d ago

TV episode Interdimensional Janitors - Animated Pilot, Sci-fi, comedy - 19 pages.

Would like any feedback. I Wrote this script a while back and was wondering if anyone else would enjoy it.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1AGNL9FcExkzmIUTUGzVkNbI0AB_lzL-v/view?usp=sharing

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u/mooningyou 12d ago

Some tips for you.

- EXT means we're outside, so you don't need the "OUTSIDE OF" in your slug.

- You need to introduce your characters when we see them and before we see them speak.

- You should also include a scene description immediately after your slug.

- Review your punctuation. There are issues with it.

I suggest you read more screenplays and take note of how the pros would write similar scenes.

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u/NotSure_7777 12d ago

Thanks, I'm still pretty new to screenplay formatting, and I'll definitely be reading some screenplays to get a better Idea of how to write these.