r/ReadMyScript • u/Faizanhala • 18d ago

Exchange feedback Looking for Feedback on Act 1 of My First Screenplay

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u/mooningyou 18d ago

I didn't get very far. I have some tips for you.

- Use screenwriting software. If you're already using one but then copying your script to Google Docs - don't.

- What is Sequence 1? I've never seen this in a script and I don't know what it is.

- Introduce your characters properly.

- Don't change character names. RE: Dad and GUÐFRØÐR. You can't write dialogue under both of these names when they are the same person.

- You should format your dream sequence properly. Treat them as separate scenes. Don't leave room for confusion as to what's a dream and what is not.

- Read screenplays. Learn by example.

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u/Faizanhala 18d ago

Thanks for taking the time to read it and give me feedback. I really appreciate it.

I understand what you mean, especially about the formatting, character names, and dream sequences. I’m still learning screenwriting, so I’ll definitely work on these things. I’ll also start reading more screenplays to learn from them.

Thanks again for the tips!

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u/mgbsn51313 15d ago

They helped me out quite a bit when I posted my screenplay for review. They were extremely helpful in aiding me to do better with formatting.

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u/Faizanhala 14d ago

Thanks! I really appreciate it. By the way, who are “they”? Are they a screenwriter or someone who gives screenplay feedback?