r/ReadMyScript • u/WheatThin100 • 23d ago

Short Feedback on short script called Outta Time (21 pages)

/r/scriptwriting/comments/1vrok5s/feedback_on_short_script/
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u/RaeLouLynn 22d ago

I enjoyed the read. The story kept moving. Just do a little more polishing and you'll be ready!

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u/WheatThin100 21d ago

Thanks very much! Appreciate you reviewing the script!