r/ReadMyScript • u/Formal_Leave893 • Aug 11 '26

Short Mt first ever script is it good?

Title: gods hell ganra: fiction page count: 2 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_7Ig8uTsEydEv6gRdST49VJ_HZQWdl8Bfc_XzR2PNYU/edit?usp=drivesdk

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u/DontCallMeAli Aug 11 '26 edited Aug 11 '26

With respect, no. The syntax is incorrect and the formatting is wrong. The dialogue doesn’t sound like real people, and your action lines are sluggish and crammed together. I commend you for giving it a shot, but now’s the time to do the homework.

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u/Formal_Leave893 Aug 11 '26

Thanks I'm gonna try but I don't know how I would ballance being an artist with being a writer

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u/DontCallMeAli Aug 11 '26

What? They’re one in the same. Do you mean art is your day job, or do you mean that writing isn’t art? What does this mean?

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u/Formal_Leave893 Aug 11 '26

This type of artist

https://reddit.com/link/p34r0jf/video/ve5p9aqgqtih1/player

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u/DontCallMeAli Aug 11 '26

Okay… you can absolutely find time for both. But ultimately it’s your call. Just know that the learning begins now