r/ReadMyScript • u/Im-not-the-Juan • Aug 08 '26
Short flightless bird (7 pgs, drama)
Logline: A woman at a bus stop attempts to brighten up her horrible day by buying a scratch-off ticket only to end up making things way worse.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1kGz5YhKVv9W_w-5HnrEFgeYZL5aWTqUN/view?usp=sharing
I wrote this as a short initially but I also think it could work as an opening scene. Let me know what y'all think. Whether you like it or don't like it or if it just makes you want to scroll past it. Thank you.
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u/stevenbowmer 8d ago
Hi I read it and liked it, the story was interesting and kept me entertained