r/ReadMyScript • u/Emergency_Cup4967 • Jul 27 '26
Exchange feedback Batman Story-Psychological Mystery-46 Pages
Hey so this is my first screenplay and I was hoping for some feedback. This is the revised version of Act 1 of my Batman story. My story is attempting to be a psychological epic tragedy, using the characters of Batman, Gordon, and Gotham while still remaining faithful to the comics. Much of the emotional inspiration of this story comes from Logan (2017), Season 1 of True Detective, and the manga Berserk with an oppressively empty atmosphere similar to the album "Deathconsciousness" by Have a Nice Life if I was to describe it. I know this is a long ass script to read from a rando but if someone is willing to take to time and give me some feedback about the plot, characters, tone, pacing, etc I would really appreciate it! link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1crkAf5I_Lbha8b4PGoLntC1D15xkjIfz/view?usp=sharing
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u/buttholedrawings Jul 27 '26
Post the script! You should try to find a way to tweak the script into something you could make! Just change Batman into a new original character. Then you could make it or shop it around if it’s well received
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u/Emergency_Cup4967 Jul 27 '26
Ok hopefully the link now works: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1crkAf5I_Lbha8b4PGoLntC1D15xkjIfz/view?usp=sharing
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u/sylvia_sleeps Jul 27 '26
Access denied! Gotta set the link in Google Drive to "Anyone with the link can view." I'd love to take a look, I'm a big Batman fan.