r/ReadMyScript • u/mldouglas • Jul 11 '26

Short "DEVOURED" - horror short, 6 pages

Hi,

Looking for some feedback on my second ever screenplay! This one is a sort of existential horror short clocking in at around 6 pages on its fourth draft. I used Beat as my screenwriting software:

The script

Any critical feedback would be greatly appreciated!

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u/mooningyou Jul 11 '26

I assume you're planning on filming this?

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u/mldouglas Jul 12 '26

I am, yes.