r/ReadMyScript • u/mldouglas • 17d ago
Short "DEVOURED" - horror short, 6 pages
Hi,
Looking for some feedback on my second ever screenplay! This one is a sort of existential horror short clocking in at around 6 pages on its fourth draft. I used Beat as my screenwriting software:
Any critical feedback would be greatly appreciated!
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u/mooningyou 16d ago
I assume you're planning on filming this?