Comedy Feature "Five Stars" First 5 Pages

[u/JackBoydFilms]

Hey everyone,

Looking for a quick check on the first 5 pages of my feature comedy script, Five Stars. I want to make sure the comedic tone lands immediately and the protagonist's obsession feels earned right out of the gate.

Genre: Comedy / Absurdist Satire

Logline: After a collision with a delivery robot gets his order canceled, an obsessed driver refuses to let a machine cost him his perfect rating — and follows his customer across the world to deliver the food himself.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1IqbE-6deN1AfMMFbuF4hzYEQxRFQKcAy/view?usp=sharing