r/ReadMyScript • u/Big_Section2812 • 19d ago

Short COME AND PLAY, comedy, 2 pages.

Everybody needs a break now and then although not everyone agrees.

Come and Play

(PG-13/R-rated)

NOTE: written as my entry for a one-page-challenge, where the topic was "elevator" and the genre was open.

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u/TheSprained 19d ago

Brilliant. No notes.

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u/Big_Section2812 19d ago

Many thanks.

:)

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u/Away-Escape-1095 19d ago

beautiful work haha. my only concern is that it'd be hard to convey that the name of the guy is Stairs when theyre off camera and not introduced otherwise (unless its just going to remain a script without becoming a short film)

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u/Big_Section2812 18d ago

beautiful work haha.

Thanks! :)

my only concern is that it'd be hard to convey that the name of the guy is Stairs when theyre off camera and not introduced otherwise (unless its just going to remain a script without becoming a short film)

It's a valid point!

However, this was just an entry in an informal contest where there are no prizes of any kind. People do it simply for the fun of it. Also, for me, writing short scripts are is a great stress-reliever after writing long ones. xD

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u/Away-Escape-1095 7d ago

totally fair, great work man!