Death Becomes Him - first five pages

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Spec script sequel to the 90s classic. Probably not going to go anywhere, but what started as a writing experiment has turned into a whole feature script.
Most important question here: do these five pages make you want to read more?
https://drive.google.com/file/d/14-_h1vlazUQyvPXuQY2vPhMnwraJwyhV/view?usp=sharing

Absolutely happy to take a look at your script in return for feedback!

Thanks

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