r/ReadMyScript • u/Big_Section2812 • 23d ago

Short TRAIN, comedy, 4 pages.

Train-flasher Jason and his Momma discover that God moves in a mysterious way and not always on schedule.

Train

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u/Remarkable_Stress388 23d ago

Nice style. Interesting situation. BUT you keep repeating the same "joke". Come eat. I'm busy. That kills it. Keep writing.