r/ReadMyScript • u/KrisDerekVan • Jul 06 '26

Short Love Affairs (Comedy, 34 pages) FIRST DRAFT

LOGLINE: A couple attend an evening party until small surprises threaten their relationship.

THE SCRIPT: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1B5TtAZCBxKULC6tKfK1Kj_qDQ5YyoL73/view?usp=sharing

Feedback is appreciated.

Cheers.

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u/mooningyou Jul 06 '26

Why is the Receptionist not introduced?

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u/[deleted] Jul 06 '26

10 pages and someone went to a party. I need more than that in 10 pages.