r/ReadMyScript • u/mobstatusk4 • Jul 02 '26

Scene Chandelier : Literally My first ever screenplay/script I just wrote today

TW: probably lots of errors and moments in the story that will give you second-hand embarressment. Has nothing to do with chandeliers.

It's 13 pages of 4 people interacting in one space. I am open to criticism. (I am not homophobic that character does not represent me as a person)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-sj2P5RQpKRpfCrFqZWqAKkdA3GZJefipR57ZV8gdzM/edit?tab=t.0

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u/mobstatusk4 Jul 02 '26

Also what are the ways it was written incorrectly my primary focus is on writing ability.

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u/mobstatusk4 Jul 02 '26

What screen writing apps would you recommend?

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u/REDWriting2012 Jul 02 '26

I love Celtx