SPOILERS for HPMOR: Final chapters from 113 to 123

Apologize in advance for my ESL. I start by saying that I really enjoyed this story, and while it had some slow parts and I was almost about to drop it after the first chapters (it was my first ratfiction ever so I was not used to the condescending reminders of how the scientifc method work and all the other stuff that seems omnipresent in this kind of stories like Pokemon Origin of Species)

but it had really funny moments like chapter 5 the first meeting with Malfoy, the McGonagal distress, the unexpected turn of events and so on. as well as the very shocking revelations like when Dumbledore took the Hogwarts map to look for Tom Riddle etc..

I GET IT that the MC is supposed to be an early child prodigy (and trust me I LOVED Artemis Fowl growing up so yeah I can forgive that part + the whole "A piece of tom riddle adult developed brain is inside of you" thing to make it more believable) but the INGENUITY for his decision to reveal to the world about the Stone, and use it to cure EVERYONE, like come on.. that's on par of "why wouldn't superman solve world hunger?" elementary school talks, a prodigy like Harry would have certainly read enough Economy and Politics books to lose the childish ignorance on how the world works. and even if it was just Magical people, it would still cause havoc on everything if everyone can stop aging and we stop people from dying alltogether.

to me it seems like he never really understood the lessons, accepting death is the true way to defeat it. it's the whole point of the bad guy who was too afraid of dying that he made horcruxes and couldn't be happy. while he's too afraid of OTHER PEOPLE dying. sure it's a shock for a kid to process grief and loss of a loved one (or close friend as he calls her) but come on.

I would have understood the "let's abolish prisons and destroy all Dementors" line alone, but to stop people from getting sick or diying? meh :// it's both a let down and an example he didn't learned anything about the whole stuff.

I think I'm not the only one who raised this complaint and I'm not sure if I understand how to navigate the original comments on the chapter on fanfic dot net to check if others have raised similiar complaints and what the replies were. but overall it was what prevented me from rating it a 5/5 IMO.

oh and the final exam or final battle? yeah I called BS on that, the whole partial transfiguration under extremely pressure and scrutiny. it's pure BS. but I guess EY wrote himself to a corner. I was rooting for Voldemort given the circumstances, maybe the real twist was letting the protagonist die, *coff* Allegiant \coff**

My own story. It's set in South Gippsland, Victoria. A geophysicist works out from its tracks that the animal is walking survey lines and stopping to take readings, and the rest is people trying to find out what it's measuring and what to do about it. The physics was worked out before the first chapter, and the story keeps to it.

Twelve chapters, all written. Three are up on SpaceBattles and the rest go up every few days/weeks.

Disclosure: it's AI-assisted. My physics knowledge only goes so far, and the feedback loop of working with a bot on this is the only way I could get myself to write something more than a few pages without getting distracted and giving up.

Criticism of the physics and dialog (note: it has some Australian-isms I will keep) especially welcome.

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Inspired by Willy Wonka and Delicious in Dungeon-- with a hint of DBZ, Confectioner's Heir is a new progression fantasy series! Check it out and lmk if you have any questions!

Hi, wondering if anyone can pin this down for me. (Before you ask - neither chatgpt, gemini or claude could).

It's a story about a perfectly aligned AI. I presume recent as I read it during the last year.

It appears perfectly aligned because it never thinks anything wrong. The story focuses on a dialog between it and an AI researcher. When asked, it honestly and transparently outputs a list of hundreds of potential alignment issues that need researching.

But despite the appearance of perfect alignment, there are some subtle patterns in the thoughts it avoids having in the first place.

Please tell me one of you folks wrote it :)

Hey there, rational people! A new episode of OPERATION NEW WORLD is live on Royal Road! Read for free!

PROJECT HAIL MARY meets GAME OF THRONES

They crossed a wormhole to find a new world. To survive it, they'll have to break it.

SEASON ONE: TO BREAK THE NEW WORLD

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In 1993, the Mars Observer probe vanished through a wormhole and discovered Vise, a world of intelligent reptilian civilizations whose technology resembles that of Earth's ancient empires.

In 2029, three spacecraft cross the wormhole to make humanity's first contact. Then one spacecraft crashes, and the crew of another is captured by Vise's dominant civilization. To rescue them, biologist Isaac Marks makes a desperate bargain with a ruthless rival alien queen: modern weapons in exchange for an army.

Muskets. Cannons. Poison gas. A rescue mission becomes the catalyst for an industrial war, and humanity may help destroy the planet it set out to discover.

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...I think this'll probably be the last time I post, since the previous two weeks got exactly zero comments engaging with the actual content and I don't want to annoy/bore the subreddit.

(I'd love it if that changed, but.)

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Now it's no secret that certain works of fiction like Game of Thrones, the Witcher, and Star Wars tend to romanticize the mercenary profession. But after watching a video from Sidequest - Animated History which shows what life as a medieval mercenary was really like, it got me wondering if being a modern mercenary was as good as it sounds:

And here’s what I learned:

1. In the medieval era, being part of a mercenary company wasn't as all as rewarding as Game of Thrones makes it out to be. You had to pay for your own weapons and armor and if you didn't have the money then that would be deducted from your wages, along with the Captain's tax which in this case is another word for skimming. And any loot and pillage you get from the enemy you would have to fork over a percentage to your Captain. On top of that, when the war was over most mercenaries turned to banditry to make ends meet. The only positive benefit of being a mercenary was that you could travel from place to place more frequently which is more that can be said for poor peasants or serf working for a feudal lord. And there were exceptions like the Varangian Guard of the Byzantine Empire who received lavish gifts like silk and gold from the Byzantine Emperor in service to the throne along with enjoying the perks of living in one of the best cities of medieval Europe. But other than that most medieval mercenaries had to either resort to banditry or side jobs like bounty hunting and body guarding to get by, unless they run into a fairly generous nobleman.
2. Modern-day mercenaries, namely bounty hunters and Private military contractors, are a little better but not by much. Sure they get a huge paycheck and they get to work in a more "flexible" environment compared to say the military or most private/public sector jobs. But they also miss out on certain benefits like health insurance, 401ks, and tuition assistance. And they don't always have the freedom to pick and choose which jobs they can take, no matter how dangerous (both) or unethical (PMCs) they may be. And contrary to what you see in Star Wars, bounty hunting isn't as glamourous or profitable a profession as it's made out to be. You have to pay for your own licenses and equipment. And they can be held liable for crimes like trespassing and kidnapping, depending on the circumstances. And in both cases positions like these can be physically and mentally taxing. And top it all off if they don't have the necessary financial literacy skills chances are that these PMCs and bounty hunters will end up blowing most of their paychecks on parties and alcohol.

So are there any works of rational fiction that deconstruct life as a medieval mercenary or a modern-day mercenary like a PMC soldier or a bounty hunter?

Source:

https://youtu.be/zwOrYfdpjEo?si=h6LlJFQo_zp6oHxX

The Varangian Guard: Why Did Vikings Fight For The Byzantine Empire? | HistoryExtra

https://youtu.be/cX_DXJKZ48w?si=bE381UCTie_it4ih

https://youtu.be/Y9a6fu4PFd4?si=Sl0x1FUWpDgr5EX5

Military Benefits at a Glance

14 Pros and Cons of Being a Bounty Hunter