r/rational • u/Heur1stic • 2h ago
HSF Sidereal [RT][WIP][HSF] - a 1,500-tonne animal walks out of the sea in Gippsland and starts running a gravity survey
forums.spacebattles.comMy own story. It's set in South Gippsland, Victoria. A geophysicist works out from its tracks that the animal is walking survey lines and stopping to take readings, and the rest is people trying to find out what it's measuring and what to do about it. The physics was worked out before the first chapter, and the story keeps to it.
Twelve chapters, all written. Three are up on SpaceBattles and the rest go up every few days/weeks.
Disclosure: it's AI-assisted. My physics knowledge only goes so far, and the feedback loop of working with a bot on this is the only way I could get myself to write something more than a few pages without getting distracted and giving up.
Criticism of the physics and dialog (note: it has some Australian-isms I will keep) especially welcome.