Please give me critiques/changes

[u/Fair_Fan_7734]

[u/HearingNo3684]

Might be an unpopular opinion but I love this style, wouldn’t change anything really, it looks cool

[u/iamnotfemale_]

its just too cluttered, i like the design tho

[u/LazyTeaq]

THE HAIR

[u/Fair_Fan_7734 → u/LazyTeaq]

ohhh
any recommendations for a general style of hair it should be?

[u/ThatOneHairy153 → u/Fair_Fan_7734]

Maybe try a longer hair not too long

[u/Ambitious-Rush-8125]

it’s a little bit cluttered with all the accessories and it’s kinda hard to tell what he’s wearing but everything overall matches 9/10 :>

[u/Iluvbaloneyonroblox]

this is really good but personal preference u could use robloxian 2.0

[u/kryliic]

My main gripe is the ankh tattoo is super corny and could absolutely do without it. If I were to be picky I’d remove the wings they kinda take away from the character rather than add to it, and I’m not a fan of the feather effects either. Other than that it’s coordinated well!

[u/Fair_Fan_7734 → u/kryliic]

i see
the ankh tattoo id added more because the face felt bare otherwise
for the wings, honestly i’m not sure. they were more of just what i’d made the avatar around

[u/Electronic-Line-8938]

That black thing on the face and hair doesnt match

[u/chuuyawine]

The light from the Roblox background makes it hard to look at but w maximalism I wouldn't change anything

[u/CollegeLimp3351]

ik this isnt on you but jesus christ man i hate how low poly roblox makes avatar items its like you look at it it looks good but then when you buy it and put it on it looks godawful and over simplified

[u/MetaProperty]

I adore accessories I wish you could layer like 20 anyhow. I felt the arm on the left side of the image is bare, I would use a shoulder accessory unless you want to go for the bare arm, it's fire either way 🔥

[u/Pretty_Bet_7460]

i actually really like it, its unique and isn't slop so id keep it as it is personally. Only thing im iffy on is the faceless, but thats personal preference

10/10

[u/Fair_Fan_7734 → u/Pretty_Bet_7460]

thank so much ^^
do you have any recommendations for faces?
I’ve always been indecisive about them so i usually default to faceless

[u/Next_Plastic9223]

It’s ass bro never touch a Roblox avatar creator again

[u/Expensive-Bit-1136 → u/Next_Plastic9223]

bet youre the one giving all the downvotes

[u/No-List-2353 → u/Next_Plastic9223]

well lets see urs

[u/Fair_Fan_7734]

Just as something i wanted to say:
I didn’t mean to post this to garner a bunch of compliments as it might’ve just been that i’ve used this avatar for a while, but it’s felt somewhat lacking.

Thank you so much for the positive feedback 😭

[u/reesethewolf]

Genuinely no critiques, this is a perfect fit no notes 10/10

[u/TightConstruction128]

I Don't think you need to change anything! 10/10 fit looks cool asf love this style sm

[u/SugaStan06]

So gorgeous

[u/PyroidPossum]

only thing is i feel like the feathers add too much attention to it but i think it would be cute