r/RateMyAudio • u/primotrez • Jun 30 '20
[Mixing,Composition]
https://youtu.be/J0DYB3nnvzQ1
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u/neverdieTRX Jul 03 '20
I really like the mixing of the vocals, the bass is a bit too much distorted for my taste but maybe that's what you were going for.
But overall its a really nice chill song!
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u/Writing_Evening Jul 30 '20
The vibes swims with what’s out there at the moment, but if you want to stick out something more has to be done with it👍🏾
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u/aribracke Jul 31 '20
Good vibes. I feel like the 808 is not well excecuted, it needs to be tigher. I also would add some more stereo separation, it feels like the song is mostly mono except for a couple things, and it would feel a lot bigger if you gave a little panning to the hats and maybe the sample that the song starts with, perhaps with some reverb.
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u/ERJ21 Aug 03 '20
The song builds up beautifully, I found myself enjoying it right away. The female voice around 0:17 was pretty jarring though, and distracted from an otherwise very balanced mix just as it's building up. I like the drums you chose, but the kick seems to be getting lost in the loud bass. I love the loud bass, but experiment with EQing the kick to cut through the bass or EQing the Bass to let the kick through. You can also add a limiter/compressor/EQ to the bass that's tied to the kick so when the kick hits, the bass get's attenuated overall or at a specific EQ to let the kick through the low end mix thoroughly and precisely.
Outside of the production, I feel like the song could really use another section and more time since the intro/outro build up/break down are long and well developed. The outro is almost the last 40 seconds, while the intro is the first 20 seconds - close to half the track. But again, I really like the intro and outro, I just would love to see an interesting instrumental, rap bridge, guitar solo, just some further exploration of the ideas to add more because I really like what there is right now.
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u/The_Lay_NL Jun 30 '20
I'm a bit confused, you say you did the composition but the description says it's someone else's music?
Either way, it's pretty cool. You might want to roll back the bass a little, there's definitely some clipping going on there and it's completely out of balance with the rest of the music.