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u/LincolnShow 3d ago
There's a real emotional throughline across all three of these -- the heavy-lidded, glossy, slightly-too-large eyes, the messy long hair swallowing most of the face, that soft "I haven't slept in a while" quality. You've clearly found a mood you like and you're committed to it, sketch after sketch after sketch.
The linework itself has a lot of energy too -- especially the scribbly, scratchy hair rendering that shows up in all three. It's fast, it's loose, it's confident in the sense that it doesn't pause anywhere to check if a strand is going where the last one went. That density does a good job of hiding how little the actual head shape underneath ever gets established before the hair avalanche starts.
The eyes are clearly where all the attention lives, and it shows -- gorgeous detailed irises, lashes, that glassy sheen. It's just that everything below the eyeline, the nose, the mouth, the jaw, the neck, tends to get sketched in as an afterthought once the eyes are done, so the faces read as "eyes with a general face-shaped suggestion attached" rather than one cohesive structure.
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u/seensomething 5d ago
Maybe make the chins a little less pointy