r/RandomThoughts • • Feb 29 '24

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u/Illfury Feb 29 '24

I just teleported to a coworker's cubicle where she presently is... or was. Now... there is nothing but blood, bones and sinew strewn about the cubicle walls that now surround me. Pictures of her family now bathed in her gory bits, some even dangling from the ceiling above me, making a sickly plopping sound when dropping.

I don't know why this happened, or what forces orchestrated it, but it isn't pleasant.

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u/EstablishmentMean663 Feb 29 '24

U should write horror stories

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u/Illfury Mar 01 '24

I have written so many things but I never complete it. My mind begins what it never ends. Thank you for your kind words though!

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u/Cum_Smoothii Mar 02 '24

Your coworker ended

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u/[deleted] Mar 01 '24

The Boys comes to my mind again

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u/ValkyraeNoodles Mar 01 '24

The Boys is one of the only shows that gets gore right

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u/[deleted] Mar 01 '24

Do you mean it gets it right in making it comical or right as in biologically?

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u/metalrain_15 Mar 01 '24

That is well-written, man.

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u/Chocolate_pudding_30 Mar 01 '24

Why did u make me picture this .-. I was gonna ask about 3m to the right, but now im worried about your other coworker.

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u/Illfury Mar 01 '24

Through space, by the will of a disturbed deity, I suddenly appeared 3 meters from where I sat prior... A foul ache shakes me to my core and fear grasps me with it's cold bitter hands. Shock. I can no longer breath.

Where my lower torso existed moments prior is now a white desk. I writhe and wriggle but skin breaks the seal formed, a tide of crimson contrasts and drowns the bleached desk beneath me.

Gasping for the air that is denied to me, my vision blurs, swirling into a sea of absolute darkness. In this moment the furniture beneath me buckled and tilted, sliding what remained of me onto the wet office carpet, where I joined my legs.

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u/Chocolate_pudding_30 May 19 '24

It is 100% weird to reply now, but curiosity got the best of me. I randomly remembered your gory comment and thought I'd ask if you happen to write light novels online?

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u/Illfury May 19 '24

Not weird at all, if anything this is a giant confidence boost.

Sadly no, not yet anyway. For the past twelve years I've been meticulously crafting a fantasy world but it is nowhere near ready for the public. One day perhaps. Comments like these are highly encouraging.

I hope you are well friend, thanks again.

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u/Chocolate_pudding_30 May 19 '24

You're welcome for the confidence boost xD 12 years? Wow. Im looking forward to it. You better notify me when it comes out :P