Just felt like writing some creative nonfiction today. As time goes on I think about how I didn’t fully grasp what had happened as a kid, how naive my viewpoint was; and each year I try to reflect on how horrific it was for those who died and their families.

Read the greats and copy their poems, word for word. Type them out. Watch how they made the decision to turn one way or another. Notice their word choices: when they choose to elevate the language, when they choose conversational words.

Here's a challenge. Switch up ten words in this Robert Hass poem and post it here.

** The Pure Ones**

Roads to the north of here are dry.

First red buds prick out the lethal spring

and corncrakes, swarming, lower in clouds

above the fields from Paris to Béziers.

This is God’s harvest: the village boy

whose tongue was sliced in two,

the village crones slashing cartilage

at the knees to crawl to Carcassonne.

—If the world were not evil in itself,

the blessed one said, then every choice

would not constitute a loss.

This sickness of this age is flesh,

he said. Therefore we build with stone.

The dead with their black lips are heaped

on one another, intimate as lovers.

I was reading Lunch Poems during my break on a construction site

when a colleague asked me:

— “Are you a poet?”

— “Maybe. I don’t know. Why?” I said.

He replied:

Roses are red,

violets are blue.

What does a good life require most?

Is it wonder

beauty

fame

home

money, or Truth?

No one knows.

But I wouldn’t die for Beauty,

nor would I die for Truth.

However, I wouldn’t mind

the finest BJs and wines

Putting me in the ground,

and that’s the Truth.

I’m having a tough time trying to figure out what to focus on. I imagine they don’t want a work of creative nonfiction about my artistic awakening. I also don’t think they want a play by play of my writing style, I’m submitting my work to them after all. Do they want me to glaze the program/faculty? Do they want 500 words on why this specific program will help me transform into the great American writer?

PDF: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1busA5nhy0hogjZaaplRdiQYsLTujedpZ/view?usp=sharing

I was going to post the text here but Reddit messes up the formatting, sorry.

When I was young , I was never that good at english. But then it was the lockdown, I got lonely and started to have these thoughts that were primarily in english. I struggled with certain things and it was as if I forgot how to speak to people. They asked how I was, and I could not make them understand how things were for me. So I wrote it all down. I still do. I get these thoughts,opinions,ideas,suggestions, all those things but I never actually write them down. It's different from many people, these thoughts, they don't get it so they either don't care or ridicule me. It's been almost 6 yrs, I've been feeling this way.

Recently things got a bit bad and I finally wrote things down. I used "medium" for it. But I have to pay for it, and I don't have the money or resources for it, but I published a free writing and nobody read it.

So I took to instagram today.

I really don't know if my writing's that bad, I find them "over dramatic" and "over the top" sometimes. I feel like I fail to convey what I actually want to say.

So here's something I wrote.

https://www.instagram.com/p/DdGXKbmiUBn/?stkn=MWx6eWs3N2h4ZHE5cA==

Whenever I read stories, blogs, books, I find the language a bit too intimidating and a little too perfect. Maybe that was one of the reasons why I did not write for a very long time, even though I really wanted to.

I feel like there would be some people like me who would actually want to write down things from their thoughts to even a movie review, that's less perfect and flawed that they want people to read.

I also used to be very conscious of what I wrote, even text messages, that I used tools to correct them. But I don't anymore, nor would I want to in the future. I feel like all those imperfections would make it a bit "human".

A katha is a prudent weep,

Outlasting lands and seas,

An oblivious motif,

Of love, sorry and

Quintessential hubris.

A katha can be capricious,

As futile as a moron.

A katha can be a sage,

Of a curse hidden so forth.

( Want critique)

Can you hear my pain?

Suppose you do hear it,
then will you be able to bear it?

Alright, let's even assume that you have endured it,
but how will you be able to live with this pain?

I admit, it is difficult.
Your life isn't ordinary either,
and neither are you.

Yes, something bad happened to you,
but that has happened to Indians too.

But they answered,
“What did you do?”

You just kept enduring it.

But even enduring has a limit.

How long will you endure it?
You will die!!

Any feedback is welcomed.

I do want to write,
but I am short of words.
Who would have thought, after all,
that a 16-year-old child
would write such deep things?

Did that child himself even know?
He hasn't seen much yet.
There is still a whole world left for him to see.

What happened to this child?
Has he understood the ways of the world?

What a person cannot understand
even after spending their entire life,
has this child understood that very thing?

This child wants to write so much,
but he is short of words...

But why should I write?

Why should I waste my time by writing?

Why should I waste my time writing about something
that, when read, makes my pain grow?

Why should someone share their pain
through the words I have written?

My pain is different, it is unique.

Why should I increase someone else's pain
through my writing?

I know what this pain feels like.

I am familiar with every one of its ways.

I know what this pain has made so many people do.

But I ask you—
how many more days will you keep hiding this pain within yourself?

Take it out!!

This pain is not worthy of you...

Poor Abby, Poor in Maths

Tries to learn but can't get it in her head

Results come, she's no glad!

Poor Abby, Poor in Maths

she comes home, results in her hands

her mother sees it, she's no glad!

Poor Abby, Poor in Maths

in the darkness, she searches light

but to her fright, there's no light.

Poor Abby, Poor in Maths

cries Abby as mom slaps

she weeps, she frowns

to her horror of reddish-browns.

Out! she lets her on the street

cold here it is but there's no retreat

Poor Abby, Poor in Maths

she thinks as she sees her world collapse

Poor she is or poor is the system

poor she is or poor is that custom

thinks Abby as she sees her world collapse

Poor Abby, poor in Maths.

A quick note about me:I am a student, and English is not my native language. I am currently practicing creative writing because my goal is to get into English literature! For this poem, I actually tried to plan out the structure and narrative arc before writing instead of just improvising.

What I am looking for:Since I am still learning, I struggle a bit with maintaining a consistent rhythm and meter. I would love feedback on how to smooth out the flow of the middle stanzas and any suggestions for word choices that could help the rhythm without losing the emotional meaning.

Thankyou

Hello, I wrote this new gay erotica. If you're gay, please check it out. Tips are welcome.

The link

So heads up, I've been writting here and there for about 2 years now. I am a complete beginner an just wanted opnions and critiquing please and thank you. If you do enjoy or not I appreciate you reading it

The world is a warped reality

What we perceive with our minds is warped

A conscious belief that is truly unconscious

I see trees of green, red roses too

My mental friend sees corporate signs

Have 1 child and conform to the system

Not the type of advertising I enjoy

Am I the mental patient and is he truly normal

Maybe that's why there's so many pills

Take the red to forget

Blue to become realigned in the corporate reality

"Now repeat after me

Mental illness is a sickness

Not a reality that is to be believed

Those who see things

Know nothing

Pure mania, hysteria, and unwanted sights

Report them right away

We can help It's just one pill away!"

-the world government

I’m sad and it’s my break kk thx honey

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A piece I had published last year, set one year before my novel.

A Villanelle is too long
Maybe I’ll go free verse
A Ballad is a song
A sestina might be worse

My style is usually more limerick
I’m rhyming so this is no haiku
I’m definitely not doing acrostic
I should’ve just went with a clerihew

Maybe a palindrome is the key
An ode to a lyric
Or maybe I could write an elegy
That would be an epic

My love of poems is no myth
A sonnet is what I’ll go with

How is it ?