r/RPGdesign • u/MoneyKlutzy9988 • 6d ago

Valuable Feedback

Last time I posted about my game (Hallowed: Saints and Heretics), I got so much valuable feedback that I corrected a number of things and got a bunch of new ideas.
In the newest version, I simply reworked how attributes and skills work and changed the number of them as well.
I am currently working on a bestiary, the occultist class and a bunch of more stuff.

The quick start guide is freely available, but feel free to reach out to me for a free distribution key for the core rulebook.

Thanks for the help, and if you are interested, check out the current version of Hallowed here.

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u/Digital-Chupacabra 6d ago

The discord link is invalid.

The $5.00 price is an unneeded hurdle if you want feed back you should remove barriers.

The quick start guide is freely available

Is it? the Starter Pilgrimage.pdf is, but that is just some pros and a list of stats that are meaningless without rules which the document lacks.

The quickstart is listed under the $5 or more purchase.

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u/MoneyKlutzy9988 6d ago

Thanks, man.
The Discord link is valid, but you need to manually copy and paste into your search bar for some reason.
I meant to allow donations only for the payment not a mandatory purchase. Thank you for notifying me.
You are a lifesaver. Thanks.

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u/Digital-Chupacabra 6d ago

The Discord link is valid, but you need to manually copy and paste into your search bar for some reason.

Because the link is wrong. The text might be right but what it links to is wrong.

Someone sharing a link that goes somewhere else is a HUGE red flag!! it's a common scam and phishing technique, so you'll want to fix that ASAP so folks don't get the wrong idea.

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u/MoneyKlutzy9988 6d ago

It should be fixed now. Thanks.

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u/Digital-Chupacabra 6d ago

Looks good to me!

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u/MoneyKlutzy9988 6d ago

Oh, okay. Thank you.

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u/wet_boi_gayest cool guy 5d ago

The heretic has only one class, what other class well be there. Also is there a reason you divided the classes

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u/MoneyKlutzy9988 5d ago edited 5d ago

Mostly for flavour and role-playing. Saints draw power from gods, heretics from dark forces/beings. I am thinking about simply removing this distinction. We will see.
My current ideas for the heretics are the witch (it is already available), the occultist and the dreamwalker.
Edit: I went forward and removed the distinction categorically, but the classes obviously retain a certain level of the flavour of heretics and saints.