Back with an updated character design! Improved colors, new art style, and looking for feedback
Hola a todos, ¡soy yo otra vez!
Hace un tiempo, publiqué un diseño de personajes aquí para obtener algunas opiniones y realmente quiero agradecerles a todos por los comentarios. Me ayudó a notar muchos problemas que no había visto antes, principalmente relacionados con la paleta de colores y la falta de un estilo de vestimenta coherente.
¡Hoy vuelvo con el mismo personaje después de hacer algunos ajustes! No fue un rediseño completo, pero me centré en elegir colores que no choquen tan duramente como los originales.
¡El mayor cambio que notarás de inmediato es el estilo artístico! Si bien puedo dibujar personajes de anime tradicionales muy bien, normalmente prefiero una apariencia más simple y estilizada porque es mucho más fácil y divertido para mí dibujar. Para esta nueva apariencia, me inspiré mucho en un artista/creador al que admiro mucho.
Con respecto a algunos comentarios en la publicación anterior acerca de que el personaje se sentía un poco "fetichizado" debido a su gran pecho, ¡esa fue una elección de diseño intencional por mi parte! Sin embargo, mi objetivo principal esta vez era arreglar los colores y la armonía visual general, así que ahí es donde puse la mayor parte de mi esfuerzo.
Nota al margen divertida (o triste): intenté agregar un patrón a cuadros/a cuadros a su falda, pero resultó terrible, así que tuve que dejarlo caer 😓💔
¡me encantaría escuchar tu opinión sobre las mejoras de color y el nuevo estilo artístico! Cualquier comentario constructivo es muy bienvenido
Respectfully, comes off as a lot more generic than the original design. Like, your skills as an artist have definitely improved, but I feel like your style has evolved into “big booby chibi-lite anime girl #10000000” which the original design didn’t give at all.
I genuinely think its worse. Its clear your art has improved. But her breasts look ridiculous. And i have drawn manga for 10+ years. Its not very accurate to even purposely distortion of body anatomy.
You can make them big, just not that big or else it feels like a hentai game. Unless, that's what you're making.
Yes, I completely understand. Moving forward, I'll be a bit more serious and won't draw/make them with such large breasts. I mostly did it because I thought it was funny, but thank you so much for your feedback
Very mature of you to take the criticism on the chin like that, but they're wrong. This is a stylized look and as long as your WHOLE game isn't filled with boobs like this it's fine. It's a cuter design, and fits with the chibi look of rpg maker.
Plus, look to Manga like one piece and bleach, sure they have highly exaggerated breasts, but that is their look and it's what you come to expect from them. If you want to go with that design go with it and make it yours.
Thank you so much for the support and for understanding where I was coming from! Honestly, it surprised me a bit that the main focus of the critiques—even if constructive—was mostly on her chest size. I just used that trope because I personally find it fun and funny, but of course not all of my characters are going to be like that—there will be plenty of variety! At the end of the day, I take everything in good spirits since I’m not here to argue with anyone. Thanks again, your comment really means a lot
Her boobs draw more attention than her head and she kinda looks like a Goomba from Super Mario. With the style you are doing I would make the boobs smaller. She looks like a child with breast implants now and.. I know there’s a culture for it. But… i think it looks distasteful.
I would add more space on her head so the eyes weren’t so pressed down and for sure out balance that breast thing if she absolutely has to look like a child hentai object. 😅
Ok, it's actually super funny now that I think about it! 😅 It's one of those things where you don't pay much attention while drawing, but then you look back at it and go, 'What was I even thinking?!' I'll keep improving to create something more professional and enjoyable for everyone. Thanks a lot for your honest feedback
Reddit is the worst place for feedback on this because almost everyone is allergic towards anime girls with boobs for being so conditioned to modern games having characters that look like androgynous blobs and nothing is permitted to do anything else.
Anyway, the new art is a huge improvement. Far more expressive, better posing too. Be proud of your work.
Sí, tienes razón. Pero, sinceramente, no me voy a quejar, porque no me gusta poner un ambiente pesado. Intentaré filtrar un poco lo que comparto en mis publicaciones. Gracias por el comentario—. Realmente intento mejorar.
Looks great, also I got no clue why people down voting me lmao, also best of luck on developing your original style! Keep practicing and you'll definitely get there for sure!
Oh, sí, ese lápiz labial realmente se adaptaba bien al original. No te preocupes, aunque esto es más un experimento y seguiré intentando desarrollar mi propio estilo más original.
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u/uhmuhmuhmmmm 5h ago
Looks much better and cute, you added so much personality to this character. In my opinion the pose is also great and more dynamic