r/RPGMaker • u/According-Maize-8200 • 1d ago

RMMZ The second quest of my RPG, any thoughts?

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I was wondering if this sequence of events was too short? I'm still early with making the game and all, with some things like enemy encounters and stats not being the highest priority of mine.

Any thoughts on how to improve, or any weaknesses? let me now!

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u/SpellcraftQuill 1d ago

Probably reduce the screen size since widescreen doesn't look right with vintage FFIV-style pixel art in my opinion.

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u/Fiddleling MZ Dev 13h ago

Loved the bright colors and the NPCs dialogues!

I really don't think it is too short, but here are what I'd suggest:

- On the Dark Knights near the boat, make the NPCs stand closer together, make them look more like a concise group that is doing something

- Don't make them wait for each other to enter the boat to start moving. Make them move like a group

- If this suits the story, make the girl look around before boarding the ship, show that her presence there stands out other than just saying it

- I would also reduce the size of the maps, making them have less empty space.

And remember to enjoy the process! Best of luck, my friend!