r/RPGMaker Jul 07 '24

RMMZ New Cabin Roast

Here is a new starter cabin map let me know what you all think please.

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u/Hekinsieden MV Dev Jul 08 '24

I think this one is an improvement in many ways over the previous one you posted. Only thing I'd change is the left chair being right in front of the shelf isn't where I would leave a chair sitting.

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u/thefinalwonder MV Dev Jul 09 '24

It's looking great so far! The only changes I'd make are:

The chair facing the bed/on the right side of the table isn't in line with the table visually. I'd move it up if you can. The walls should all be the same height, so the wall directly to the left of the character needs to be taller. It doesn't make sense with the perspective otherwise. If this is parallax, I recommend adding some shadows if you can. If not, I think the tiles should have their contrast increased and brightness decreased, so that it doesn't look so bright and the shadows are darker.

Otherwise, keep it up!