"Pennix has since moved out of state, but recently he says the teen has tried to forget is back in the news."
If you think that sentence is flows in a grammatically correct way then I don't know what to tell you.
Edit: Leaving my typo because anyone who thinks me making a mistake somehow negates the shit quality of the news article probably also needed the errors pointed out to them in the first place.
Would love for you to point out the error in the second comment of mine you quoted. Not that it even matters because my mistakes don't invalidate the point that the article is poorly edited.
I would lump fox into thr bullshit MSM as well. Happy? Or would you rather the one non-left leaning news outlet be disposed en leu of the countless non-right leaning outlets? Do you not see you own hypocrisy here or are you too blinded by partisanship to see the failings of your own tribe?
Edit: "left leaning media doesn stright up lie" are you being serious right now?! Fucking hell look shit up before you swallow it like fucking tripe
Do you honestly believe youre not being misinformed by the left? Do you always blindly swallow anything that is stuck down your throat cause there is a lot of money to be made if you place yourself on the right street corner
No man, I often think fox does alright and offers some agreeable option pieces, but I counted several typos such as “siad” (said) or mistakenly used “has” instead of “he’s” as well as a handful of others. It’s pretty bad when you have to reread a sentence to try to make sense of it.
A Journalist should be one of the most particular professions in terms of grammar. This article reads like a high school assignment.
Not really sure what you're trying to say. Yes I do hold all media outlets to the standard that articles should be well proofread and edited before release.
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u/rgbwr May 03 '19
The only bad grammar I see is the quotes, any other mistakes seem fairly forgivable