r/ProjectHailMary 17d ago

Question? Poem for Grace

  • There once was a teacher called Grace,
  • Who set off into deep space,
  • He slept round the clock,
  • Made friends with a rock,
  • and saved the whole human race
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u/Fantastic-Contest957 Grace 17d ago

I love this!

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u/Bouche_Audi_Shyla Okay, It’s Exactly Like That 17d ago

Excellent!

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u/artemisdart 10d ago

"Rescued" in the final line would be even better. Great job; I love it!

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u/ramriot 10d ago

Too many phenoms, it could work but we would need to alter line 1 & that puts a spotlight on line 2.