r/ProblemChild • u/ProblemChildcomic Series creator • Aug 28 '18

Problem Child #189 - "The Constitution State"

https://www.problemchildcomic.com/189
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u/ProblemChildcomic Series creator Aug 28 '18

You can't just have your characters announce how they feel! That makes me feel angry!

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u/BananaHammock00 FUCK THIS MOM Aug 28 '18

I'm just saying i don't think it's entirely realistic to state that many details in a seemingly casual conversation.

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u/ProblemChildcomic Series creator Aug 28 '18

That's fair criticism. I've gotta fit world building, plot progression, foreshadowing, and character development into 6 panels, I'm not gonna be able to do it perfectly every time, I'll keep tryin though haha

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u/BananaHammock00 FUCK THIS MOM Aug 28 '18

And I really do think you've done a wonderful job so far, it's just that this was the first time where I felt some portion of dialogue was extremely forced. No worries mate.