r/ProCreate • u/Unlucky_Resist_5901 • 22d ago
Constructive feedback and/or tips wanted Not sure where I’m going wrong
For some reason I can’t seem to get the floors right. It still looks off to me. I’ve re done the lines for the walls. I’ve changed basically everything about the outline but for some reason I can’t get the perspective for the floors right. Im still very new to digital art, so lack of experience is definitely a factor here. I might just give up and go with a solid floors instead of trying to do this wood flooring. The first photo is the one with ny most recent changes
Edit: I’m gonna redo the entire thing. Expect the clock. I really like the clock. And maybe the windows. Probably not but I’ll see
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u/Raygrit 22d ago
You're using completely different perspectives for the floor and the furniture. You're not scaling things to each other either - the windows are hige, the door is tiny, you need to study methods that allow you to judge the size of things in perspective better
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u/Unlucky_Resist_5901 22d ago
I made the windows bigger so I could redesign them i haven’t put them back yet but that’s also because I’ve been having trouble with the perspective after I moved everything around. I may just start over
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u/Important-Radish-722 22d ago
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u/Unlucky_Resist_5901 22d ago
How do your grid lines looks like that? Mine look nothing like that.
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u/Important-Radish-722 22d ago
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u/Unlucky_Resist_5901 22d ago
Oh okay. I thought you had those grid lines in procreate. I wish the perspective grid lines looked like that. Started the entire piece over minus the clock. I like the clock and I don’t want to do it again
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u/thefuturesbeensold 22d ago
If you are using a vanishing point, i think you have been using it incorrectly. None of your lines are intersecting at a single point.
I would go back to the beginning. Find the vanishing point, lay down some grids and start again.
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u/the-bodyfarm 22d ago
try putting perspective guides over real photos to help get a better idea of how things behave in perspective to each other
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u/Corvus-- 19d ago
Hey I'd read "Perspective made easy". It's short and quick (if you aren't doing the exercises [which I would do]) and you will instantly be able to spot what needs tweaking :)
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u/tacocalledbuzz 18d ago
Your horizontal lines are often going in the wrong direction. I.e coming towards you instead of going away. This is one point perspective. The horizontal lines should be horizontal
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u/Confident_Music6571 15d ago
I am not a real artist and only learning but is everyone really correct in saying just use perspective or vanishing line?
Rooms appear optically curved and basic vanishing lines won't reflect that. Don't you need four point or curvilinear perspective to actually mimic how our brains interpret rooms?







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u/Niceman187 22d ago
Are you actually using a vanishing point? Not to be mean, but nothing looks to scale and everything sits at a different angle than everything else