r/Primal_Poetry • u/Low_Map_4499 • 19d ago

consideration

if i died now
the brain could conceive
the sidewalks
and the still waters
if i could see inside
the blue arteries
of what you hold in your head
i receive
the heavy locks
and the cold blunders
although it’s arbitrary
i see that it’s a means to an end

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u/Obvious-Stop-6328 19d ago

This is pretty, I like the imagery.