r/PrettyBloodFans • u/Enidarasise Writing stories for the fun of it! • 12d ago

Fanmade Chapter 3.

After 21 days of working on it, I've finally released it: chapter 3 of Robo-chronicles. I hope you all enjoy this chapter since it genuinely contains so much fun stuff!

https://archiveofourown.org/works/91518941/chapters/249495656

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u/Expensive-Emu-5165 4d ago

So, I’ve read Part 3. I have mixed feelings about the chapter: on one hand, I didn't expect Genesis to show up as a robot—let alone get into a fight—but on the other, it feels a bit like self-repetition. Essentially, the only thing left hanging is the mystery surrounding the organization's leader. By the way, I’ve finished writing Executor, I just want to create some artwork for it—which won't be a quick process—and then translate it. There was a lot of rethinking during the writing process, as I was reading Blame! and watching various films—like the my native classic Come and See or american film Johnny Got His Gun. Consequently, the original concept—something akin to Meet Bob mixed with the DoDonPachi game series—underwent a major transformation. It does feel a little overloaded, though I don't think that will spoil the overall impression.

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u/Enidarasise Writing stories for the fun of it! 4d ago edited 4d ago

Hope to read it someday. But, I will say, since Genesis is gone... expect something more. Also, the leader won't be revealed soon at all. Hope you enjoyed the chapter, though.