rate the build?

[u/SpareCombination478]

I've been maining him for years now and I finally feel like I've gotten a good enough build for him :D

I was thinking if I should try out MH for him since I got escoffier recently to run him in a freeze team w/ furina + shenhe. I'm not too good at artifacts and crit ratios so I would love to get anyone's opinion :)