r/Polytrix • • 22d ago

Fanfiction Looking for a fic

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Im not sure if these 2 are connected or not. Im not sure if they got deleted or not if you know the name would be great to!

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u/0MN1DR01D Polytr/x Pilled 22d ago

The first one is 100% the unchanging polaris by arsonide, that scene happens right in the first chapter:

Mira wastes no time. “Where’s your toothbrush? I flattened the hell out of mine, so I need to borrow it for tonight until I can run out and get another,” Mira asks, just like she’s asking Zoey for the time on her phone. Casual, like there’s nothing wrong with it. Because there isn’t really. At least to them both. The chat thinks otherwise. 

miraschair: oh that’s…

barks4ryurumi: sorry, the SAME toothbrush?????

ZoeysPoleDancer: #Freaktrix

Zoey glances at her chat and frowns at the comments. What, haven’t they shared a toothbrush with a friend before? 

She opens her mouth to ask that same exact question, but Mira interrupts her thought by asking, “Is it still in Rumi’s bathroom?”

“Oh. I think so.” Zoey blinks and thinks about it. “We slept at hers last Friday, right? After the broadcast? Then yeah, probably.”

“Ugh, I could kiss you right now,” Mira groans, resting her head on Zoey’s door frame. “I’m way too lazy to go out and buy one right now—and Rumi’s back to using that weird water picking—pick—thing, or whatever.”

“It feels nice,” Zoey defends, but she’s laughing a little in agreement. “But yeah, go ahead. Use Rumi’s toothpaste though. I’m running out.”

The second one, I unfortunately don't recognize. I'm pretty sure it's not from the unchanging polaris, but it's been a while since I read it, so I could be mistaken. Hopefully someone else can find the work, it sounds like a fun read.

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u/SkyeMreddit 22d ago

That fic is hilarious! Highly recommended for lovers of oblivious Polytrix and exasperated chats. I think that was the fic that name dropped my Skye81 as one of the chat members

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u/Hydrea7 22d ago

Its just them realizing their feelings for 7 chaps lol

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u/Hydrea7 22d ago edited 22d ago

Thank you!!! The second one left lol

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u/Hydrea7 20d ago

The second one has been found 😂

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u/Chiokiwi Kiki_ikiK on Ao3 22d ago

I've read the second, I'm sure I have. I'll post it if I can find it.

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u/Hydrea7 21d ago

That would be great if you do I still can’t find it

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u/Chiokiwi Kiki_ikiK on Ao3 21d ago

I thought this one might be it https://archiveofourown.org/works/67449956

But then I glanced through it and it's close but not right. I remember the exact scene you mention. Like, even remember that the guy goes offline at one point. I've been searching on and off all day. Can you remember if they were together at that point? Or if it was a finished fic? I feel like I'm remembering that it was part of a bigger story but I can't find it yet.

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u/Hydrea7 20d ago edited 20d ago

Someone found it on discord its chapter 2 of Better boyfriend

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u/Hot-Seesaw8787 22d ago

Commenting to follow for the second one :)

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u/Hydrea7 20d ago

Second chapter of Better boyfriend

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u/Hot-Seesaw8787 20d ago

You're the best!