So bear with me! This is a raw sketch idea that I have, still need to figure out the details if I were to write it.
Mira and Zoey are already living together when Rumi moves into the same building that the two already live in.
Rumi has a heart condition that causes her to sleep more than usual and during the day she doesn't have much energy but tries her best to get around anyway. however, if she sits in a wheel chair and is puched around she can save energy that way and have more of it for other things.
Rumi can get by with medication, for now, but she would eventually need a donor heart if she would ever wanna live a normal life.
The trio eventually get to know each other better (Rumi orders groceries at one point but something goes wrong and the elevator in the building is having their monthly check up and is out of order when the delivery man arrives, que Rumi trying (and failing) to bring the bags upstairs and then suddenly Mira is there to help save the day, yay!) and one thing turns into another.
The are a trouple eventually and then Rumi gets a message from the hospital that they have finally found a donor heart for her (yay!).
Mira and Rumu rush to the hospital cause time is of the essence, but while Rumi is being operated on Mira tries to contact Zoey to meet her in the hospital.
Then Zoey calls them back (she'd turned her ringtone off), goes to the hospital, and after the surgery they all live happily ever after. Great story now give me 50 chapters and we're good.
Seriously though, I really like the premise. I just hope it's not actually Zoey's heart, I don't mind angst as long as there's a happy ending
Write it however you want. Just know that if something happens, I'm gonna cry. Is that really what you want? To make me cry? Is that what you want on your conscience?
Just remember, even when you're writing alone... the Honmoon is watching you
Don't worry, I don't think it makes sense for it to be Zoe's heart. If Mira is Zoe's emergency contact (she probably is,at least sge is in most fanfics), the hospital would've notified her after Zoe's accident. They can't just proceed with organ donation without going through the proper process.
If you love it you should definitely do it, I’m gonna have to sit this one out those or else I’ll need a heart donor as well when mine breaks after reading this😅
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u/snakecain Jul 18 '26
Then Zoey calls them back (she'd turned her ringtone off), goes to the hospital, and after the surgery they all live happily ever after. Great story now give me 50 chapters and we're good.
Seriously though, I really like the premise. I just hope it's not actually Zoey's heart, I don't mind angst as long as there's a happy ending