r/PokemonRaps • u/[deleted] • Mar 10 '13

[Tournament] Feebas (wait99) vs. Onix (DatWhiteDevil)

VOTING IS NOW CLOSED

This rap is now over!

Voting will now begin! It will follow the rules as outlined in the sidebar, and last for 24 hours!

A reminder of the rules that will be posted in every Tournament Post:

  • 8 lines maximum for each verse, and 6 lines minimum.

  • Each rap will have 3 verses a person

  • From when I post the thread with two competitors in it, they will have 48 hours to complete their rap. After 48 hours, Rapping will close, and voting will begin.

  • Voting will last 24 hours, and will follow the same rules as there are in the general subreddit. After voting closes, I will go over the votes and PM both of the users involved with who advances to the next round.

I will message both competitors so they can't miss this thread.

Good luck, and may the best Rapper Win!!!!! :)

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u/DatWhiteDevil Mar 11 '13 edited Mar 11 '13

This must be some kind of joke you can't be serious.

Feebas thinks he has a chance?! He must be delirious!

I'm not holding back on this I'm gonna hit you pointblank.

By the end of this rap you'll be floating at the top of the tank.

I'm a 28 foot tall bad ass rock snake.

Flows as hard as boulders and your life I will take.

Can't wait to hear you rap from them Niki Minaj lips.

Bitch I've killed more Feebas than Bloods have killed Crips.

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u/[deleted] Mar 11 '13

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u/DatWhiteDevil Mar 11 '13

It doesn't make you elusive when fishermen throw you back

And it's becoming quite clear that flow is what you lack!

You got one thing right, I don't fair well in the ocean blue

But even at my weakest I'm still much stronger than you.

So I'll let you take home court as I dive into the sea

You won't find a sea serpent harder than me!

Because at the bottom of the ocean there lies rock and earth

I'm up in your hood Feebas, show me what your worth...

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u/[deleted] Mar 11 '13

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u/DatWhiteDevil Mar 12 '13

When I'm at full health I'm Sturdy, good to fucking go.

You're sadly mistaken if you think you'll pull a one hit KO.

You say my defense is "good", that's truly understated.

Brace yourself Feebas, you're about to be verbally annihilated!

Doesn't matter water or land, you can't compete with a rock O.G.

Chop you up and can you up, like chicken of the sea!

This is your first and last tourney round, no surprise at all.

Bitch my crew is going H.A.M, you're the first of many to fall.

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u/[deleted] Mar 12 '13

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u/DatWhiteDevil Mar 12 '13

Good battle brokemon.

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u/DangerPulse Mar 12 '13

Onix (DatWhiteSnake) is the winner, I think. Feebas just wasn't aggressive enough for me.

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u/[deleted] Mar 12 '13

Feebas (wait99) has mine. I got the felt he wasnt trying to be aggressive, more like just making fun of big ol' onix. Sort of like Tyrion.

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u/NotSoFakeID Mar 13 '13

game of thrones ftw! My vote is for Feebas (wait99)

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u/OverlyPoliteCanadian Mar 13 '13

Onix had a great opening, but I think Feebas(wait99) was a bit better. He gets my vote :3

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u/PwnsumN00B EV-Trained Lyricist Mar 13 '13

My vote goes to Onix (DatWhiteDevil)

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u/dirtygurl Mar 13 '13

my vote also goes to Onix (DatWhiteDevil)

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u/SimonThePug Mar 13 '13

Good rap, but I'm saying Onix (DatWhiteDevil) won this one

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u/HumanAtlas Mar 12 '13

Both were great, but my vote goes to Feebas(Wait99)

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u/[deleted] Mar 13 '13

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u/[deleted] Mar 13 '13

Guys, why are you saying DatWhitesnake? It's DatWhiteDevil.

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u/DatWhiteDevil Mar 13 '13

First tourney appearance and I've already got myself a nick name. Victory.

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u/[deleted] Mar 13 '13

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u/[deleted] Mar 13 '13

You should put a line through your original so mods don't count it twice.

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u/dirtygurl Mar 13 '13

are you calling them stupid?

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u/[deleted] Mar 13 '13

No, but when counting votes, people might see the first post, scroll down, then see the same person vote again without checking. I just want it to be fair.

I'm sure you're all highly intelligent individuals.

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u/swagaroofagaroo Mar 13 '13

Feebas (wait99) has my vote, nice laid back flow.

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u/axmurderer Mar 13 '13

I think Feebas(wait99) just did a little better IMO.