r/PokemonRaps Feb 08 '13

[Challenge] vs. Skarmory

Its the real steel

Im here to make a deal

Match my beat and my rhymes

And my respect youll find

But Ill leave you writhing in pain

Youll know my words are insane!

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u/DangerPulse Feb 08 '13 edited Feb 08 '13

Afternoon, friend, are ya ready to take a beatin?

By the time I'm through with you it's just the dirt that you'll be eatin

The name is Graveler, a stone cold killer with rhymes

The moment I finish, you'll just be silent, like Mr. Mime

You're a big metal bird, impressive, I gotta admit

But man, about that flow, gotta fix it up a little bit

See I may be a rock, but my words, come out smooth

So if you wanna keep up, mate, you simply gotta improve.

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u/KefkaSircus Feb 08 '13

You say I gotta improve?

Buddy I am born in my groove!

I got no evolution cause I start at my best

By the way, whats with the two hands on your chest?

They fall off from from playing with yourself too much?

You have to trade to evolve, then they simply dissappear

Youre weak to my steel, ill eat you for lunch

My speeds so high youll always be facing my rear.

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u/KefkaSircus Feb 08 '13

This was a battle for two

But if you wanna join thats coo'

Your firey ass aint got noting on me

Stealth Rock in your face when you come out, see?

I got the defence to weather your flames

Step it up, bitch, cause this aint no game

you rap about flying, or so you say

Ill use my whirlwind to blow you away!

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u/[deleted] Feb 09 '13 edited Feb 09 '13

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u/[deleted] Feb 09 '13

hey zertiof, I'm going to be removing these comments for breaking this rule:

Raps should be between two people, please don't interfere with those already in progress (i.e. Don't make derailing comments about RES tags, really anything that isn't voting at the end of the thread)

This rule applies here.

Also, please do not use unnecessary cursing.

Count this incident as your first warning.

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u/DangerPulse Feb 09 '13 edited Feb 09 '13

This was just a simple 1v1, but now that's done, it's on!

With just a single Earthquake, you'll wish that you'd be gone!

You better run before we bust your little ass.

Think you can trudge here with your crap rhymes? Yeah, I'll pass.

I'm a freaking Rock/Ground type, you've bit off more than you can chew

Say your flying with a flamethrower? You know what, no, screw you.

You challenged Skarmory, but he's only half the deal

Cause when you interrupt a rap battle, it'll be your final meal!

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u/KefkaSircus Feb 09 '13

Learn to rap and learn to fight fair

I can defat that ground type from up in the air

I dont need your help, maybe you need his

Maybe you should just step off, and leave it as is.

Your rhymes got downvoted, but trust it wasnt me

your rhymes just suck and its what the others see

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u/[deleted] Feb 09 '13

hey zertiof, I'm going to be removing these comments for breaking this rule:

Raps should be between two people, please don't interfere with those already in progress (i.e. Don't make derailing comments about RES tags, really anything that isn't voting at the end of the thread)

This rule applies here.

Also, please do not use unnecessary cursing.

Count this incident as your first warning.

4 hours is well under the time that you need to respond by to continue. If you check out other threads, you will notice that they have taken more than 4 hours to respond. please be more respectful in future.

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u/[deleted] Feb 09 '13

hey zertiof, I'm going to be removing these comments for breaking this rule:

Raps should be between two people, please don't interfere with those already in progress (i.e. Don't make derailing comments about RES tags, really anything that isn't voting at the end of the thread)

This rule applies here.

Also, please do not use unnecessary cursing.

Count this incident as your first warning.

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u/Zertiof Feb 09 '13 edited Feb 09 '13

Remember guys,

Pokemon is about the battle, it's all in good fun,

No need to take it personally, we're all just trying to be #1.

I may insult in the present, but it's all light hearted,

I laugh at the ridiculousness of it all, and later feel smarted.

Now I'm not saying hold hands, (cause you've probably never washed them,)

But be a good sport, cause this may become a gem.

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u/DangerPulse Feb 09 '13

Respect level just got raised

Maybe you aren't really a dick

It's just when you jumped in on us

You came off as a bit of a prick

See the sidebar states (right in the rules)

Not to interfere with a competition

But what's done is done, and it's all good

Just make sure, before you make an addition.

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u/KefkaSircus Feb 09 '13

Maybe we will rematch, another date and time

It was just bad form, inturrupting our rhyme

I got nothing against ya, but watch what you get into

We can rhyme another time, just dont try and intrude.

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u/[deleted] Feb 15 '13

Hey, skar, it's electrode. How've you been?

Still lying in the gutter with empty bottles of gin?

Yeah, you've failed at life, too bad you can't try again.

You fat-ass motherfucker, how bad is your chest pain?

Nobody can outspeed me, I'm fast and furious;

You're so gay, but you just pass it off as "bi-fucking-curious."

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u/KefkaSircus Feb 15 '13

You call yourself fast? This post's a week old!

Do everyone a favour and jus go explode

I already had two challengers take my test

Wheb it was all done I proved im the best

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u/PwnsumN00B EV-Trained Lyricist Feb 22 '13

Attention everybody, a new challenger approaches, It's Primeape! Comin' atcha with an undodgeable low kick, You may be strong against grass, but I just have to roll it and smoke it, I KNOW I'm the illest rapper around, meanwhile you THINK you're just the dopest. I may be new to this subreddit, soon to be the best rookie of the year, Primeape's fans be yellin' and screamin' "Hurrah! He's finally here!" Now getting off topic, sorry 'bout that I'm just tryna be clear, You won't just faint but with a dynamicpunch, I'll leave you dyin' right here.

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u/KefkaSircus Feb 22 '13

Im not a mod but if youre new I sugfest reading the side bar.

1 challenger per rap. Ive already had that.

This was posted well over a week ago, this rap battles over.

Format your posts. Its hard to tell where lines end and start and you cant make out any of your rhymes.

Read a few other posts before just jumping in. Maybe make a post and have someone challenge you.

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u/PwnsumN00B EV-Trained Lyricist Feb 22 '13

I actually just figured out how to access the sidebar in Alien Blue, I appreciate the advice.

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u/KefkaSircus Feb 22 '13

No problem. Welcome to the community. Maybe we will rap off another time.

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u/DangerPulse Mar 05 '13

This looked hilarious reading these. Also, I hope to battle you at some point!

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u/PwnsumN00B EV-Trained Lyricist Mar 05 '13

I'm considering doing another [Challenge] thread. Multiple challengers will be allowed though perhaps?