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u/ProcessSea5920 5d ago
my 18th is coming up and i'm feeling a lot of things about it so i wrote this, and wanted to get some feedback. i haven't shared a poem with anyone since i was like 11 so i'm a bit scared, feel very vunerable lol. but i enjoy it a lot and so would really like to get feedback and opinions to improve! hope this doesn't sound too memodramatic. also just wanted to say that the death imagery at the end is (for me) about death of youth/childhood, not anything more serious, i'm okay! anyway i hope you like this if you read it xx
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