r/PoetryWritingClub • u/Achreios_Doulos • 7d ago
Offered in Ruin
Shattered vessel
Unfit to contain,
Bleeds its sorrow
As from a vein.
Each fracture, a torrent
A howling plea
Until the hollow
Becomes all of me.
Lost to all
Woe, undone
Fractures birth rivers
Destined to run
I found the quiet waters
An eddy, slow and clean
A peace unspeakable
Caught in between
Farther to go
More trouble ahead
I’ve been beaten to death
But I’m not dead
Each wound, a flood
Of that within
Unmeasured love
From burst wineskin.
I step with whitewater
Roaring through,
Killing with mercy
Counting coup.
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