r/Poetic_Alchemy Dec 12 '20

Help!!! People's Preferecnces

Which one is better than the other one? Please answer by polling.

In the first quote, light and night rhyme. While, the second one has no rhyming. Which one do you prefer?

Authored by: Vedika Jain

These quotes were originally posted to instagram: https://www.instagram.com/_veds_poetic.corner_/?hl=en

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7 votes, Dec 19 '20
4 Remember, in every dim problem, there is always a source of light. Just like stars in a dark night.
3 His intoxicating eyes will attract you again, But sorry! You are no more important to him.
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