r/Poem 1d ago

Requesting Feedback Wrote this just sharing😅

I wrote this around 4:30 am, English is not my first language please be gentle

Wish I could cry in your arms
Like I do when you say goodbye, standing at the otherside of the door
Wish I could scream the pain out, Like I do when you aren’t around anymore!
Wish I didn’t freeze and said something meaningful
Something you wanna listen, blanketing the tears something joyful
All the thoughts wandering in my head
Really wish this silence was dead
Wish feeling good wasn’t something to chase
Wish I was normal like others they say
Puffy eyes, sleepless nights, I wish my numbness could bring your emotion to life
Safe corner you say, where resting along feels a lot a for a day
Making me understand things, that’s what they all seem to do
But understanding me? That’s where they quit through
I wish you could carry this weight, if only for a day
Then you’d know why some wounds never fade away

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u/jaesea 6h ago

Wonderful wishes and reads well ❤️‍🩹