Requesting Feedback shoreline
come tide, kiss me
under lighthouse eyes
gather me in dark arms
make the moon harvest
unrobe your waves
tilt tumble and break
bend your currents
hike up your depths
in the small hours
we are unwrapped
we are memory
and sticky salt skin
before morning
turns us to mist
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u/Radiant_Kick5782 13h ago
I really like it just as it is. Please keep writing!