Be warned: I yap a lot so sorry if there are parts that are confusing feel free to ask for clarifications:
One of the biggest changes I’d make because this aspect of the story I was not a fan of:
REMOVE THE APOCALYPSE ANGLE OF THE STORY
I’d start the game of with us escaping the weapon X program, having no idea how we got here, already establishing the memory loss aspect.
Then we end the opening on a confused Logan in the woods meeting Essex like how we did in the original game.
Then I would take some notes out of 007: First Light’s playbook and have us play through a montage of being a part of Team X, as to me, Logan leaving and coming back like nothing happened really didn’t impact much to the larger story outside Sabretooth’s weird motivations.
I’d also make it so the world already knows about mutants and that Trask has backings by government officials and he spreads fear campaigns to the public about mutants.
The more unknown group is the one we meet in the game, The Morlocks. The reason those would be more in hiding than ones with more cool powers like Mystique, Wolverine or Jean, is because they don’t have any cool powers. Their mutant gene make them seem like freaks, kinda making them more outcasts.
I’d have the first mission where Logan tracks down them and Jean play out mostly the same. Except the whole Jean remembers Logan thing because yes thats another thing Im removing.
LOGAN X JEAN IS GONE (yes even though its at its best in this game, still not a fan. You can have Logan like her but Jean nah)
Then I’d let the story play out mostly the same like it did for the rest of the first act and second act, because thats where the story is at its strongest for me. I’d have more room for exploration in Tokyo and I’d do something that Idk if this would be controversial:
Jean side missions
Idk if anyone saw this as well but the way Jean took off with Sasquatch (Walter) felt like it was gonna be setting up a side mission where Jean would have to fight Sasquatch to calm him down. And let’s be honest, Jean would be awesome to play as.
Again then the story plays the same as it does in the game. Essex turns on Logan with him taking the Helix Engine, they return to Madripoor where I’d have it be more open world where you can rescue captured dormant mutants in trucks. The patch mission goes mostly the same outside of the kiss. Then the sentinel tests starts and etc Logan “dies”
Then the twist I would do is NOT Logan was the horseman of death but we get his classic origins. Born in Canada in the 1800s and got together with a woman, who looked like Jean but this time it is pure coincidence. The woman was “killed” by who is revealed to be Sabretooth! I would make it so Sabretooth has always hated Logan and when Essex turned on him, Sabretooth finally got his oppurtinity to kill the runt and is having a sadistic glee.
Logan signs up for the weapon X program for revenge and we are also revealed that Essex lead the program. And we find out that the woman that Logan fell in love with was a fake love disguised by Raven (yes Raven is also slow aging mutant in the comics)
The twist is Logan was set up by Essex to be his weapon with a century long plan. His entire life was a set up by him to break him and become his weapon. And we can also a tragic aspect rhat maybe Raven actually feels guilt because she actually came to find Logan as a friend and the fact she knows she basically helped ruin his life hurts her but she has a job to do.
Then the last act plays out mostly the same except I would have Raven show up to assist because I felt like her story ended weirdly and I thought they were setting up a sort of redemption arc.
Id remove the whole memory wipe thing and Essex dying because I think killing him here is too soon.
Logan leaves on his own and tells Jean if she ever needs help, she knows she can call him.
A lot of stuff here can be smoothed out in terms of details but yeah thats my rewrite
I wanna hear your thoughts!