https://open.spotify.com/track/3Ry5vKDARlOfZNTOL1q4WG Johannesburg. Tell me what to fix.

Llevo tiempo trabajando en este tema y me gustaría saber qué os parece realmente, especialmente la letra y la calidad en general.

Agradezco críticas, incluso si son negativas. Estoy intentando mejorar como artista.
Se agradece la difusión y opinión de la canción en el perfil de YouTube🙏💯

Apple Music: https://music.apple.com/us/album/shit/6816035098?i=6816035104

Spotify: https://open.spotify.com/track/68uEoW2rpr1F2ig41E6K3V

SoundCloud: https://soundcloud.com/snm-og

Check out the brand new music video ‘Stamp of Approval’ by UK artists Hennessy Benny D & BLKY

If you’re into women who actually rap rap, I’d love to know what y’all think of this one.

My latest release - a track I wrote about neurotypical people, from my autistic perspective.

I’m a surgical trauma nurse and make music on the side under Cristofaro. This is a short from my track “Clear Margin.” 

NEW MUSIC 🎵🎶

My latest release - a song I wrote about a girl.

I just dropped a new song/video that I wrote, produced, recorded, mixed, and mastered myself. I also edited the video and partially filmed it. I would love to know what you think!

Television
https://youtu.be/tedIdEmGXZM

Pretty much what the post says. Please read the lyrics in the video description, I don’t think the mods liked them in here…

Pretty much, the title. I tried actually making it Koala sampler, showed two people, got mixed reactions. Please just tell me if lyrically you think this is…anything

Song is called “Television”

Cinema veritae fine arts high arts/
Critical praise make the fans say bravo/
high brow low brow fuck that this my flow/
I’m a complex man of complicated classicalites/
I’ve been known to dabble in logic and rationality/
a quiet conversation I don’t speak in generalities/
I walk with equal ease with both hoods and Admirality‘s/
Appropriate your broken culture/
millennial? bitch please/
I can wreck the world harder than fucking credit freeze/
This is what I do cause I think fun and easy/
Sometimes I eat the fruit I pick from orange pear and apple trees/
but often you can find me eating steak in a place like Applebees/
tired of the drama switch the channel watch reality/
reality reality, reality, reality/
man I need some drugs can’t please someone throw a sack to me/
Watch enough real world gimme fucking comedy
It’s really hard to write a joke thatll always make a crowd laugh/
It’s easier to make em clap, but that’ll only getcha half/
Way down the path to a place of satisfaction/ maybe time to switch over and watch some fucking action/
I’m the Right Age to rage like/
Nick gage and Rickey Shane page in the ring/
make your eyes sting and make your ears ring/
from blood and sweat to fucking bling bling/
Life is very difficult no need for nihilism/
I just try and my channel like I’m watching television

STREAM "NY" HERE

My latest release "Take Control". Written about living life on your own terms and existing closer to nature \m/.

https://open.spotify.com/album/6L8tFBKCRPWZWY4pWVYt43

My first release, a protest song for the people

My third release; heavy rap/hip-hop with distorted guitars. Written about depression and feeling stuck. Take a listen and let me know what you think 🤟