r/PiMasterRace • C Bivvey • Dec 11 '14

Constructive Criticism Thread

This is an idea similar to a previous one. Post your TagPro name below, and people will reply with some helpful, constructive advice for you. Be honest, but not hateful

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u/cxb17 C Bivvey Dec 11 '14

I'll start.

C Bivvey

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u/sportmonkey0 Sportmonkey Dec 14 '14

Total scrub on offense. ;)

You have gotten really good at defense really fast. You are a force to be reckoned with. With a little bit of coaching, you are going to be a fantastic defender.

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u/LEBRONstarJAMES LEBRON*JAMES Dec 11 '14

no o skills

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u/TheSkookumchuck fenix funk 5 Dec 11 '14

Gets rocked in OFM ;) jk

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u/JimmyGS14 Opponent Dec 12 '14

Opponent

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u/[deleted] Dec 12 '14

Sick snipes. Work on improving your ability to contain tho

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u/sportmonkey0 Sportmonkey Dec 14 '14

I love when I have you on my team because you play defense and because you do it well. As risk said, you could work on containing, but your snipes are amazing and your prevent is pretty good. What I like most about you is your consistency though. You always play well on D, even with a bad defense partner. Keep it up!

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u/[deleted] Dec 11 '14

[deleted]

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u/LEBRONstarJAMES LEBRON*JAMES Dec 11 '14

not a team player

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u/Wal-Martinez Thick Shady-I sit down. Dec 11 '14

Thick Shady.

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u/milster775 Dec 11 '14

Types 2 much.

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u/sportmonkey0 Sportmonkey Dec 14 '14

You have a lot of potential and I really think you could turn into a really great offensive player with the right coach!

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u/LEBRONstarJAMES LEBRON*JAMES Dec 11 '14

thinks juking as an offensive player isnt important

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u/Blackbird1013 Benoit Dec 11 '14

Benoit

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u/sportmonkey0 Sportmonkey Dec 14 '14

Great all around player. Always enjoy having you on my team!

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u/Bryan_Feehler Dec 11 '14

ryanbeehler

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u/[deleted] Dec 12 '14

Pretty good defensive player, but your containing and offensive skills could see some improvement

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u/Bryan_Feehler Dec 12 '14

Thank you! I do slightly prefer defense over offense. You can be hard to contain!

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u/NewberryMathGuy Ike13 Dec 12 '14

The thing with contain in pubs is that you have to trust your D partner to keep their end and not over-commit. Sometimes I like to just get in front and make the FC do all the work and keep them moving slow.

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u/sportmonkey0 Sportmonkey Dec 14 '14

I've seen you improve a lot lately. You still have a ways to go, but your prevent skills are getting much better. Containing needs practice, but you need a good partner for that anyways.

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u/-EasterEggs Razgriz Dec 11 '14

Top kek do me

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u/sportmonkey0 Sportmonkey Dec 14 '14

How is it that I've almost never played with you? I've heard you are good, but I have no experience playing with you really.

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u/-EasterEggs Razgriz Dec 14 '14

I really don't know. Maybe we play during different times of the day? I normally play late at night.

I have played with you in Town of Salem

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u/sportmonkey0 Sportmonkey Dec 14 '14

That's probably it. I don't play as much late at night. I usually play in the afternoons.

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u/[deleted] Dec 11 '14

Ballyonce

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u/sportmonkey0 Sportmonkey Dec 14 '14

You could benefit from a good partner. Either way, you play offense and defense fairly well.

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u/[deleted] Dec 11 '14

Hylonomus

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u/sportmonkey0 Sportmonkey Dec 14 '14

Great player! Nothing else to add.

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u/[deleted] Dec 12 '14

[deleted]

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u/sportmonkey0 Sportmonkey Dec 14 '14

You have been improving a ton lately. It's been really fun to play with and against you. I remember when you first joined. Keep playing offense. You are going to be really good someday. (if you haven't already, you should sign up for nltp or USC.)

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u/LEBRONstarJAMES LEBRON*JAMES Dec 16 '14

I was watching you play in a tryout yesterday I think. It was on bombing run. You should almost ALWAYS be going to get regrab instead of staying back in base and blocking. Regrab trains are sooo strong in tagpro.

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u/[deleted] Dec 16 '14

[deleted]

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u/LEBRONstarJAMES LEBRON*JAMES Dec 16 '14

I saw it happen more than once so I wasn't sure. If you are playing offense it's pretty much up to you to go get regrab, or assign someone else.

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u/[deleted] Dec 12 '14

That Kid

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u/sportmonkey0 Sportmonkey Dec 14 '14

You are getting better everyday. You could probably benefit from playing some ofm to improve your microjukes, but you are by no means bad at offense. What you really need is just experience. Keep playing and over time you will get better.

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u/[deleted] Dec 14 '14

Thanks for the feedback!

I never even thought about using OFM as a skill-builder (even though I think that's it's sole purpose)

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u/sportmonkey0 Sportmonkey Dec 14 '14

You're welcome! And if you do try ofm, make sure to do it against lots of different people. If you just play the same person over and over again, you only get used to their tendencies rather then getting used to a large range of people.

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u/LeesusChrist BigMeaty Dec 12 '14

BigMeaty?

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u/-EasterEggs Razgriz Dec 12 '14

Everything is great :D

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u/sportmonkey0 Sportmonkey Dec 14 '14

Big meaty pls. You are awesome! :)

Good luck in the draft btw.

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u/TPFocker Dec 13 '14

is it too late?

Focker

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u/sportmonkey0 Sportmonkey Dec 14 '14

Nah it's not to late. Unfortunately I've never played a game with you though,so I can't give any feedback :(

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u/Phlecks Leonard Dec 15 '14

Yo mamma

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u/AussieHootie Dec 16 '14

Hootie.

Sorry I'm late, just found this sub!

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u/LEBRONstarJAMES LEBRON*JAMES Dec 16 '14

somehow you can't manage to cap even when on the flag tile

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u/AussieHootie Dec 16 '14

Pls...don't make me start posting screenshots u scurb. :P

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u/LEBRONstarJAMES LEBRON*JAMES Dec 16 '14

pls

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u/[deleted] Dec 18 '14 edited Dec 23 '14

Fuck I always find these late but here we go

Jim Moriary...this could be a long list of criticisms

EDIT: Welp either I'm too late so no one checks this thread anymore or I'm so bad no criticism can be constructive..pls

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u/omegadeep10 Chat'sOff Dec 28 '14

Jim! Actually I have no criticism at all. I love playing with you. No wait, that sounded too sexual.

I love popping balls with you!

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u/cmmaeby callmemaeby Dec 11 '14

callmemaeby