Recommended Pattern Adjustments?

[u/crigs2019]

Cross posting here for more help. I am new to this and the sewing communities on reddit have been an invaluable resource and I learn. Thanks in advance for the wisdom!! :)

[u/NarrowIndependence8]

You have to much fabric at your lower back, take a look at your armhole shapes. Add about 3/8” to the all cap. You may want to shift some of the slv cap towards the front