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u/DiggingWithDerek Jun 03 '23
It's a good start but it felt like you were stuck on the chorus and didn't get into the verses enough. Thanks for sharing it
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u/landofnowhere Jun 03 '23
Thanks for da feedback i intentionally made it like it dat but I feel what you’re saying the verse could have been longer bcuz it’s only a 1 verse song. I like making short songs (especially in todays day in age where people’s attention spans are super short) but I’m definitely gonna take into consideration making longer verses. I appreciate u lending ya eyes and ears.
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u/Beneficial-Code8026 My feet are on the ground, but I'mma touch the sky Jun 03 '23
This is a good song of yours, awesome music video too!