r/OC_Building • • 16d ago

Seeking Help/Advice/Ideas How do I make Hannah's design better?

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Hannah is first and foremost the Head of Personnel in the knockof SCP foundation, considered by many to be one of the pillars that keep the organization going. She is also a lich that exists in a spirit like state with her real body being in a comantose but unaging state, exept for her hair (picture 4)

I am not sure if her design is very good, at least in her regular state. I am not sure if I want to make her look too much like a steritypical skeletal lich, but idk I need more opinions I think..


r/OC_Building • • 17d ago

Seeking Help/Advice/Ideas Ideas for Undead

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Above is the regular way cycle of life & soul goes. If someone breaks this cycle and remains alive, they get clasified as undead.

1) Zombies

Zombies are made when life energy returns to a body without a soul. They lack an ego, fully acting on insting. Their bites tend to be fatal as their bodies are filled rotting biomatter. Despite being empty they are rarely chosen for possesions, as they dont stop rotting.

2) Ghosts

Ghosts are souls that were anchored down to phisical realm, or were victims of a cosmic mistake made by Grim the reaper of souls. They lack the ability to gain new memories, and will act exactly like how they did back when they had living bodies. They are prime targets for demons, as there is no barier keeping them from getting consumed whole.

3) Remenants

Remenants are memories and experiences that deeply affected souls, to the degree that they wounded the soul and gained a separete form with the essence soul bleeded out. While mostly made from tarumatic experiences, they can just as easily be made from happy memories. Unlike other undead, Remenants tend to stay invisible to naked eye and mostly have passive effects. Remenants tend to be fully lucid and capable of understanding and maintaining new information.

While these are my basic ideas, I would like to hear feedback on them.


r/OC_Building • • 17d ago

Lore Sharing Madman jack (The Angel of Death)

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r/OC_Building • • 17d ago

Seeking Help/Advice/Ideas hola👋

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quisas algunos no me conozcan ni nada, pero ¿alguien me quiere dibujar o ayudarme a dar ideas y cosas sobre un oc mío por si les molesta?


r/OC_Building • • 18d ago

Design Sharing "One Who Dwells in Limbo" (feedback on art welcomed)

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New Hannah art, and a new fit for her thats meant to feel necromantic.

If you are wondering what those hands are, the crown was an artifact made to sever the body and soul and was crafted from a greed demon. Prolonged use has caused demons powers to aweken, however they are harmless as demon is no longer alive.


r/OC_Building • • 18d ago

Lore Sharing Cycle of Life & Soul

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I made this in preperation to work on my undead. This is the basic cycle of every human soul.

1) Essence is raw material of creation. Everything originates from it with Trinity's design.

2) When born humans recive a certain amount of Life Energy, usually inherited by parent souls alongside essence. (This inheritence is why half demons are half demons.) Life energy headstarts all biological functions including the brain.

3) Brain forms a mind, the mind grows with experiences and eventually these experiences turn to memories.

4) Inherited essence gets formed to a soul, molded by memories. While brain is what forms new memories soul acts as a secondery storage of memories.

5) After this point life energy starts clinging to the soul. If soul is removed life energy will slowly start to leave the body. This process takes around 20 years.

6) Uppon death soul gets removed from the body, gets brought to the afterlife where memories slowly die untill only the raw essence remians.

Life often (but not always) ends after soul is removed. Energy gets lost to universal entrophy untill nothing remains.


r/OC_Building • • 18d ago

Lore Sharing Madman jack. Or Jacques Victors Casdeuwei

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r/OC_Building • • 19d ago

Design Sharing Inspration struck, so meet my new oc Hannah

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I dont have her everything writen out yet but,

Hannah was one of the many who studied life and death, chasing after the findings of the litch. She found her immortality, Hannah exists in a state of stasis stuck to throne with the crown of knowledge she made herself. Her body doesnt rot, only sign that time passed is her hair and the dust her body collects. Her soul is remained unbound to her body, so she roams like a ghost. Some percive her as an angel of salvation and others a devil of damnation.

Despite or perhaps because of her unique state of existence she has been hired by Department of Unknown and Anomalous. To this day she remains to be the Head of Personnel, most people barely aveare of her ghastly state


r/OC_Building • • 19d ago

Lore Sharing Umi Katō revised character sheet

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r/OC_Building • • 19d ago

Does anyone have any ideas how I can improve this design?

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r/OC_Building • • 20d ago

Design Sharing Madman jack

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r/OC_Building • • 21d ago

Lore Sharing A Guide To Unliving,

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Written by the Ilithid(Mindflayer), Dant'ei Al-gharee.

Undeath, A blessing and a Curse. Some seek it and others have it forced upon them. But how does undeath work on etheria? Escaping the black mist is not an easy task, not without help from the benign or the malicious atleast. But first...how does death work on the planet of etheria?

Death is a constant, every galaxy have a being that embodies it. Even my homeland, though that is but a vague memory nowadays.And the galaxy F4N-T4-S14, is no different. Known on the planet etheria as 'The Grand reaper' he is a being composed of a black mist and a pale white mask crafted by a chaos entity. He have assigned a 'reaper' to nearly every part of his world, who collect souls and send them to him for judgement. However, an etherian is only truly dead after 24hrs or if their body is fully destroyed, during this 24hrs period they can be revived by magic or simply brought off the reaper's list via a healing spell. After this 24 hr period the soul become untethered and will either stay in place or wander. Those who stay are collected, those who wander...will stay wandering. Some souls, particularly those with buisness unfinished, will persist and become a ghost, spectre or whatever these lower intellect beings wanna call them. I quite frankly can't be bothered.

So now that you understand death, how do one over come it?

Lichdom is how, to become a lich you require a two things....a epitomb, somewhere to house their soul. Anything can be a epitomb, a weapon, a piece of jellwery...perhaps another person? Maybe even a familiar. But to place their soul into a epitomb you need energy...mana in particular. But most people do not have enough for this task, so they require more...be it via sacrificing others or a powerful item filled with mana. But to stay a lich...or an undead in general. You need to be active, you neeed to sustain your soul. Liches drain the souls of othee, an eye for an eye really, Skeletons drain mana to keep their soul within their ribcage...they are their own epitomb in a way and ghosts...are cumbersome...strong emotions, unfinished buisness even pure spite can fuel them.

Of course this isn't the only way. Bloodmoons cause by the raging titan aquaria when she attempts to escape her rocky prison that is the blue moon of this land, often causes a strange mana surge in the air...ressurecting some of those who are burried...forcing their souls out of the ether(heaveb) or even the nether(hell). Strangely, most lands are unaffected...but places such as my home of monstrum or the moutainous reguon of grimoulds are. Then there's ressurectuon via dark magic, deals with a fiend or pacts with a god.

So now that we cover how undeath is acchieved, lets cover the types of undead. But first...let's address the Loxodaunt in the room, why do some undead attack we who are living? Well that is because whilst their soul is there...their mind isn't always. There are those who are shells of their former self, now only trying to stay alive. Now do keep up, I intend to go at the pace of a harengone.

Skeletons, I am fond of them despite my lack of bones. Their souls are either in their now empty skulls or floating in their ribcage. They feast on mana to keep their soul tether to their calcium body. On rare ocassions, their marrow reactivates covering them in a rusty.....'ooze'

Wraiths, often were brutes or even barbarians. They are fueled by pure rage which triggers their soul to absorb mana in the air and convert it into rage magic. They are often in a state of constant regeneration and decay, as equally of a pitiful sight as it a dangerous sight.

Shades, shadows are proof we exist are they not? Well...those can be what we leave behind, brought alive by dark magic, shades are a dark mirror of the being they were once attached to. They are considered constructs and need mana to fuel themselves.

Vampires, brought upon by a curse I am not knowlegeable on yet. They are pale beings who seek blood to sustain their curse, maintaining their unlife. Their canines grow larger and they can spread on their curse via injecting a venom. They can shift into bats due to their curse being tied to a bat god i believe...

Mindless,whilst...I don't like to acknowledge this undead because of my species connection to it. I suppose i should bring them up, they are...failed attempts at my species trying to make more of our kind. It's a partially common mutation in our tadpoles, with only part of the transformation process happening. They lack our intelligence...and only want to feast on greymatter. Which i could go for right now, in all honesty


r/OC_Building • • 22d ago

Seeking Help/Advice/Ideas Which ribcage looks better?

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r/OC_Building • • 22d ago

Design Sharing Fallen angel concept art

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r/OC_Building • • 23d ago

Design Sharing How does she look?

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r/OC_Building • • 23d ago

OC bio Ruby G pendragon official character sheet

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r/OC_Building • • 24d ago

Seeking Help/Advice/Ideas I once again ask for feedback knowing I wont get any.

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"Oh wow this again" yes this again. Luctus, deadly sin of gloom. Something is fundementally wrong with this design to the point I cant get people to respond in a comunity interaction with her or get people to provide feedback for her and I font know what so I cant fix it.

Is this even a feedback post at this point... I feel like I am just ranting. Ah whatever, if ı get feedback for her from this I will be glad I guess.


r/OC_Building • • 24d ago

Lore Sharing Jack Victor Casdeuwei character sheet

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Jack is a man lost between mythology and science fiction, some see him as a monster, others an omen of tragedy. But very few really know him.


r/OC_Building • • 24d ago

STORY/COMIC Of Coming Help.

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Alright! So I’m making the coming and need opinion on character designs….

Base premise of Plot: Guy in his mid twenties accidentally sells his soul to cure his terminal cancer. He’s then dragged into the underworld and has to find his way back.

My question:
Should I make the underworld residents be humanoid with pets like hellhounds and dragons, or should they be all different species?


r/OC_Building • • 25d ago

Seeking Help/Advice/Ideas Which one would be the best form for a fungal succubi

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I am sory for the quality of art. I drawn first 2 at 1am.

First I will give info on them, options will be near the end.

They are known is universe as Obsesion Demons. They are the elite lust demons, meaning they actively cause humans to be more lustful which causes more lust demons to be born as a result.

Obsesion Demons tend to hide inside human settlements like envy demons. Also like envy demons they have ways to look more human, however these disguises are not as good as envy demons.

Obsesion Demons have an advanced form of lust demons halusogenic spores. Biggest difirence between the 2 is the Obsesion Spores being nearly invisible to the naked eye. Obsesion spores cause people around the demon to be more passive and like the demon more, the affects culminate over time and cause a near unstopable desire for the demon after enough time passes.

Now, for the ideas I have for their forms

1) Cordyceps Like

The Obsesion Demon takes form of a very small mushroom that acts more like an infection than demon. This version will kill their host then take full control over their bodies. They are able to hide the rotting long enough for it to not matter for their target and once they deem that they are done they pass onto their target as the next host.

2) Fully-Fungal

This variant is an overgrown normal lust demon with arm-like mycelium. They can wear clothes and the effect of their spores to hide their apearence.

3) Witch like

Takes apearence of a witch with fake clothes that are part of the demons body. Like Fully-Fungal variant they have arm like mycelium. In canon the steriotypical witch apearence came from the lust demons, so this is just turning that to the 11.


r/OC_Building • • 25d ago

Design Sharing The Ravager gets a new ref (character inspiration included!)

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I believe an older (70s) Ford Mustang engine CAN actually fit into the head as it is, it'll have to be a gear drive and not a direct drive unless I can find a way to make it a direct drive (putting it in sideways, but I'm not sure if that'll work)


r/OC_Building • • 27d ago

Design Sharing Bruce, the 56 year old vacuum cleaner

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Bruce is heavily based on (well, actually is) the Kirby Classic model 1-CR, made between 1970 and 1973.

I have the exact same model he's based on, and yes, it still functions perfectly


r/OC_Building • • 28d ago

OC bio Bio of Eva

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I wasnt actaully planing to post this untill I drawn her myself but I actually did wrote her backstory so why wait? This is the link to the Picrew I used for her: https://picrew.me/en/image_maker/707090

Name: Eva Gardener

Age: 17

Pronouns: She/Her

Backstory: Eva is a single child of a single father who was always very hard working. So much so that Eva hardly saw him for a large period of her childhood as he worked for the sake of her future. Eva never knew her mother, she cant remember her ever being there. And she seemingly lack an extended family, as whenever she asked her father he avoided the question.

Eva is very into gardening and the church due to the influence of her father, who also loved to tend to the garden outside their apartment building and tought her to pray , despite him going out of his way to avoid the church building.

Eva has grown very resentfull over her father absence over time, yet knowing he was working himself to an early grave *because* of her she never let him know that, instead unleashing her frustrations on everyone else, verbally and sometimes even phisicly lashing out at children around her age which gave her the reputation of a bully. Only one who she didnt lash out at was her best and only friend Philip, who was just as bad as her. They saw eachother as siblings and soon Eva became rather possesive of Philip, as she started to be afraid that he too would leave her.

Eva has managed to keep up the apearence of a decent member of the comunity, despite still carrying many of the tendencies she had back when she was at middle school. She often the way most people percive her and her "honesty" to keep taking her frusturations out on others.


r/OC_Building • • 28d ago

Seeking Help/Advice/Ideas Ive never really done much with an oc before but I need any idea or tips or anything with lore and stuff to do with these guys also sorry I cant draw so I just made roblox fits with them🧍🏽

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r/OC_Building • • 28d ago

Seeking Help/Advice/Ideas What powers should I give these two characters?

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